Friday, August 8, 2008
hee hee shall use the blog to post my tots on the video as the shout box will take forever
firstly i tink the video is very gd n conveys the message across
just some minor adjustments regarding the words etc
- "even a stickman volunteer" is it purposely done tis way as the correct english is volunteers
- "absurb" is meant to be spelt absurd
- "negative hearsay add fear I have" to negative hearsay ADDED fear I HAD
- the wrong abt 2 things part i was tinking if its possible to make it a cross then times 2 eg Xx2
- there is tis line passionate volunteers drive passionate volunteers, was tinking if its possible to change the second passionate to something else such as commited, wonderful or wateva else to put inside
- "everyone help" to everyone helps
hope these are useful n meaningful comments
nomaD
-- posted by Another IMHopian @ 12:23 AM --